I absolutely loved this. I'm able to easily immerse myself into worlds like this, especially when they're well written, which this game is written fairly well. Despite it just being a Bitsy game, I imagined a small simple town like mine, which can actually be creepy at times. The whole game was like being in an episode of the Twilight Zone, which ever since I was a kid, has been one of my favorite shows, so I commend you for pulling me back to my childhood, thank you! I love that I actually had to figure out where to go, rather than just being told, so that was really fun.
The dialogue can be a tiny bit off for me, such as one of the lines at the very end spoken by the plant/comet/thing "Some of them are incredibly coward." Not to be a self-righteous member of the Grammar Police, but it should be "Some of them are incredibly cowardice."
But other than that minuscule sliver of a detail, I can't wait to see if you're going to pop out anymore!